一.大略概括
这就是我今年的英语作文，虽然没用定语从句，但用了比较多的句式吧。
感觉还凑合，8分左右的样子。
这其实是个看图作文，因为现在试卷还没有公布出来，所以我也没法把图发上来！
大家凑合看看我写的这文吧。 意思大略是帮助老盲人过马路这是中心点！ 有了图再补上吧！
二.英语作文
Tom is a good student , he is famous for helping others. One day,he was taking a walk with his family , a reporter met him and wanted to take a photo for him , when Tom was ready for this , he saw an old blind man wanted to go across the street , so he rushed into there and helped the old man cross the street .Then he invited the old blind man to take photos with them Everyone was very happy , they are all proud of Tom
三.词组解析
1.be famous for以什么而出名
2.take a walk 散步
3.take a photo 照相
4. be ready for 为什么做准备
5.go across the street 过马路
6.cross the street 同上
7.help sb （to）do sth帮助某人做某事
8.invite sb to do sth 邀请某人做某事
9.be proud of 为谁感到骄傲
he saw an old blind man (who) wanted to go across the street——定从= =
你这是 刚中考完？ 暑假后上高中？
@卢旭庆 是的！是的！是的！是的！
从One day开始到so he rushed into there and helped the old man cross the street
这是好几句话，你要都点的逗号那问题不小呢
@FROYO 哈，你从哪里上的高中？ 省实验？
@露水晨曦 我是在历城二中上的，离你那里好远啊
@FROYO 嗯，杯具啊，悲催没考上省实验，今年历城二中择校分数线貌似是496 你在哪上的大学？
so he rush into there and help the old man cross the street .时态貌似有问题啊？
@一念花开 rushed ，into 是多余的 我当时写错。 helped 当时读了一遍好像没出错，可能是我记错了，这是我根据当时写的复述出来的！